Hot air balloon went wrong

(Orientation)

On landing, it would be very hard as she is up in the mid-air, 
she closed her eyes so tight she could not see a thing and imagined being on the ground and
what it would be like.For once the hot air balloon ran out of gas  she would have no choice but to go
down so fast. It started, it felt like her face went inside her body.
Alice couldn't help herself but scream out for help.
Eventually, she landed on a little island with one coconut tree and on that
one coconut tree there are only three coconuts. She kept on yelling help ,help, help
but no one could hear her as she is so far away.Alice stayed there for the night in the freezing cold
and said this is the worst birthday present ever and she felt like an ice block that was left in the freezer
for 2 years.

Alice woke up in the morning and she was just about to say good morning to her parents but
they were not there.Alice nearly cried so hard so she could have had some water to drink,
but she didn’t and she talked to herself like if her parents were there.
“How was your sleep last night” ?asks Alice  (acting like her mum)
“Good thank you, Mum, how was you sleep? Did you sleep well in the freezing cold?”
said Alice. “Yes I did thank you for asking but it was quite cold last night wasn’t it?”
says Alice (acting like her mum). She carried on like that and she even added her dad in it at some points.
Alice was definitely missing her family back at home which made her really sad she couldn’t see them.
Night time came along and she has a coconut for tea then she went to bed and froze her butt off again.
(complication and events)

The next day when she woke up there was a boat, waiting for her on that boat her parents were waiting.
When she hopped on, Alice gave them a big hug and said:
“I am so glad to see you, I have missed you both so much”.
Then off they went the waves were so rough they had to stop and stay the night where they were.
The next morning they headed off again but the weather was terrible but they got through it and went
to another island a little bit closer to land. They stayed there for a bit and then left.
Eventually, they made it home. They were so glad to be home.
The first thing Alice went and did was go to her bed. (Resolution)

In conclusion, Alice decided she was never ever going on a hot air balloon again. 

She said “It was the scariest time in my life.”

As for her parents, they said “ we were worried about her and it was even worse when we
found out where she was”.

 Everyone agreed they are not going on a hot air balloon again.