Welcome to my blog, I am a student at Blaketown School in Greymouth, NZ.
Kia ora Lily,Charlotte here from the SLJ team. Ka pai for creating this wonderful summer poem! I love the line "Remember the burning sun, shining on your back". This instantly makes me think of the beach!It sounds like you spent a lot of time at the beach this summer. Did you have a good time?I have been to the beach a few times but I definitely want to go more!Ngā mihi,Charlotte
Hi CharlotteIt's Lilly here from Blaketown school. Its fine with the name everyone spells it wrong because it is a weird way to spell it.I have been to the beach a lot this summer its one of my favourite places to go.I love going there and watching the sunset while standing in the cold water that has to be my favourite part. Do u like going to the beach?GoodbyeLilly
Oops, sorry Lilly - I should have written "Lilly" not "Lily". I have a friend who spells her name "Lily" so I'm too used to typing that! :)
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Lily,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the SLJ team.
Ka pai for creating this wonderful summer poem!
I love the line "Remember the burning sun, shining on your back". This instantly makes me think of the beach!
It sounds like you spent a lot of time at the beach this summer. Did you have a good time?
I have been to the beach a few times but I definitely want to go more!
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte
Hi Charlotte
DeleteIt's Lilly here from Blaketown school.
Its fine with the name everyone spells it wrong because it is a weird way to spell it.
I have been to the beach a lot this summer its one of my favourite places to go.
I love going there and watching the sunset while standing in the cold water that has to be my favourite part.
Do u like going to the beach?
Goodbye
Lilly
Oops, sorry Lilly - I should have written "Lilly" not "Lily". I have a friend who spells her name "Lily" so I'm too used to typing that! :)
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